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Shabbat Shalom

Shabbat Shalom. Sabbath Peace. I hope you experience it this weekend.

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This week I got a very nice letter from a reader named David. He’s a physician, husband and father, and shared some of his spiritual journey with me. He and his family “began keeping Sabbath in 2005,” he explained.

In that decade of practice, he and his family have found a lighthearted joy in this day. He shared a poem that he wrote for his wife and son, which he graciously allowed me to share with you.

I know–I normally don’t run poems here on the blog. Don’t consider this an open call for poetry. Please don’t inundate me with poetry. Simply enjoy the good doctor’s poem, which I think captures the joy and freedom and peace, the Shabbat Shalom that we all so desperately need in our lives–and that God so wants to give to us.

Sabbath Rest

by David Hirstius

Sabbath rest, Sabbath joy,

Just you, me, and our boy.

We’ve been waiting all week long,

Play a game, sing a song.

Light the candles, time has come,

Sabbath freedom is for everyone.

Bake the bread, watch it rise,

Taste creation’s greatest prize.

Say the blessing, pour the wine,

See the Sabbath candles shine.

Cook a meal, eat it slow,

We have nowhere else to go.

Sabbath rest for man and beast,

Even our dogs enjoy the feast.

Let those dishes pile up high,

Until tomorrow lights the sky.

No work, or sorrow, only play,

Let’s stay together on Sabbath day.

Afternoon comes and there’s a lull,

Sometimes Sabbath rest feels dull.

But then think of the day we’ve had,

And maybe a lull isn’t so bad.

So, let’s give thanks to God above,

For me and you and life and love.

Today no worry, pain, or sorrow,

They will all gladly wait ‘til tomorrow.

This is the time to love and rest,

Our gentle God knows what we need best.

Sabbath rest, Sabbath joy,

Just you, me, and our boy.

Copyright Dr. David Hirstius, used with permission


  1. David, this is great. You have a wonderful outlook on life.You only get out of life, from what you put into it.
    Yours will be well rewarded.
    Uncle Bruce

  2. David you have a way with words as you do with people….Glad you are in our family Mom G

  3. Lovely, my friend. I sometimes spend some Sabbath time at the clothesline,which in the old days might have been considered irreverent but since God is everywhere equally present, I notice that I am aware of the Divine especially at the clothesline!

    • Thanks, Jan. That’s a peaceful image: hanging clothes on a line. Thanks.

  4. David , What can I say other than absolutely awesome!!! Aunt Emma

  5. Praise God from a whom all blessings flow. Well said Doc!! Thanks for sharing. Susie

  6. What an inspiring poem. Makes me appreciate the Sabbath day that we all take foe granted sometimes. You rwords are very inspirational.

  7. You my sir are very talented man. This is so very lovely. Words of wisdom and pure love.

  8. lovely message, Dr Dave!
    Well done friend

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